Simplicity
the state, quality, or an instance of being simple.
I chose this statement for my topic. "Simplicity helps us to maintain clarity of mind and purpose." I picked this statement because I agree that I need to give up lots of things to focus on only one thing.
Source- http://www.wisdomcommons.org/118-simpicity/essay
I came to America when I was in 6th grade. I came to America to learn English so I can succeed later on. I gave up so many things to come to America. First, I had to leave my family and my friends. I think that it was the hardest things to do to come here. Next I had to study more than playing with my friends. I had to spend more time and make more effort understand its concept because every subject was in English not in Korea.
When I first heard about simplicity I did not understand its concept but I think I learned a lot about simplicity from this homework. Also I found out something really important by doing my English homework. I found out why we had meetings for worship and moment of silence before class. I think we have meetings for worship and moment of silence before we start our class so we can think about simplicity like peace.
Daniel, I am so proud of you for the hard work you invested. You have so much courage. You did give up so many things and you are succeeding. Great job, Daniel!
ReplyDelete3/5 You have a lot of good ideas here. We need to work together on correcting the tense in your writing. I will help you. Also, the subject verb agreements in your sentences are not correct. For example, your last sentence would be more correct if you wrote, "I think we have Meeting for Worship and Moments of Silence before we start our classes so we can think about simple ideas like peace."